Silver Insanity

Chapter 19:

Then he remembered that if he just stayed calm, it would be alright.
It would be all right.


You might wonder why I’m not grouping you into similar skill levels.” He eyes the class, then smiled,
He eyeD the class, then smiled.

I liked meeting the other students. You've got good variety there, in terms of powers and species and background stories.

But argh! Cliffhanger! See, if I just waited til Saturday to read, I'd have only one day of suspense.

*grins* Yay, programming! Yeah, I notice little things. Sometimes, it is a curse! Chapter 17: “I’m Kate, er, Catherine, Air Praeda.” He thought a moment, “I prefer Kate, and I’m hoping to be a healer. I was planning on going into pre-med before I burst.” She bowed a little, and sat. SHE thought for ...

Again, Jove has great parents, and I am glad he knows it.

Ah, the first class, and intros. Fun! And there is always that guy, who doesn't raise his hand.

I am interested that Hypatia did not mention Chris' presence in her class. That is intriguing.

Chapter 16 “Classroom 102, this is me.” The sign flashed a now familiar glow when it’s name was said. “I’ll catch you for lunch after class?” Its name was said. Wrong its! Aside from the stone walls and floor, the room resembled the classrooms jove was familiar with. Capitalize Jove Four rows of fou...

Chapter Fifteen made me giggle at the end. I needed that, and your story needed that. Good! Also, thank you for involved and fairly normal parents. I really like the fact that Jove's parents visit and are involved in his life. Also, good threat there, to prevent a fight. It shows that Jove can think...

I'm liking Chapter 14. Seeing Jove have some doubts and worries is good. He is supremely comfortable with everything, which is odd, and this is a good contrast.

I like Tan. And Chris is an enigma.

Chapter 14 “Rai was getting your copy of Revoker. I guess he got board.” He got bored A few minutes later, Jove and Tan sat on the couch while Chris looked on. Tan explained, “Revoker is a fan made supplement, so it’s a little limit in scope. You wouldn’t have heard of it. It is a little limitED in ...

OK, Revoker : The Forgotten is the most hilarious thing I've read this week. Thanks! You've got teenage nervousness down pretty good. Jove's continuing "this all makes sense, I just fit in" thing is weird though. I am sure there is an explanation, but his casual acceptance of everything ne...

Huh? I thought the book responded. The book is an "it."

The phrase "I responded" makes no sense, as this is not a first person narrative (Jove is not telling it first person, thus the use of "I" outside of dialogue does not make sense).