Silver Insanity

Chapter 42

Her whole body grew, even hunched over as it was, Elsa was taller then before her change.

Taller thAn before her change.

Also, I like the idea of tofu stir fry for those who are not Venator. That's a good little bit of world-building.

Chapter 39 More involved simple uses include gravity and metals. Not really a typo, but the wording is awkward. "More involved" typically means the exact opposite of "simple." Chapter 40 Didn't see any. Chapter 41 That evening Jove and his friends were sitting around one of the ...

Chapter 39 Not as much going on here. I did like the fact that Jove decided on how to introduce himself. Chapter 40 Wow, Chris has some pretty intense feelings, for having known Jove a week. That's a bit overwhelming, and Jove's reaction makes sense. I like the realization that Tan might be panicke...

Chapter 37

Jove wished he could get rid of the tears in Tan’s eyes. He made a conscious effort not to boost Tan’s magi though.

Tan's magiC?

Tan started to say something but cut him off, “Just maintain the spell.”

but JOVE cut him off.

Chapter 38

Didn't see any.

Chapter 37

Wow, awkwardness. It fits. College students.

Tan's panic made sense too.

Chapter 38

And MORE awkwardness. Man, does everyone have a crush on Jove? Or is that their magic?

I like Elsa. She seems at lot more grounded than everyone else.

Game rocks, and tonight had more than usual in the way of hilarious quotes. ~~~ I commented that after the ambush of the leader of the Red Court, the Veantori Umbrorum might be a bit short on resources for another round of attacks. The GM Agreed: "It's really hard to sanctify napalm, I'm just s...

Chapter 35

“He’d dead. You killed him.” South was pale and shaking.

He'S dead.

“They’re probably forbid students from entering the Abyss for the Summer.

They'LL probably...

Chapter 36

“You already know the answer to that, silly fox.” Jove magic started to follow a scent.

Jove'S magic

Chapter 35 I'm totally confused. How can Merlin not be the one that possessed Mark? He just complained about someone breaking his neck. That is what Jove did to the mage possessing Mark. So very lost. Chapter 36 Ah, dream sequences. You like them, don't you. This one worked for me, other than Jove r...

Chapter 33: Not unexpected, Chris showed no sign of reaction or discomfort. I think that should be "not unexpectedly" Chapter 34: The walls seemed to buckle inward in odd shapes, waves of stone where strait stones used to be. Where STRAIGHT stones used to be. The fox smiled, “I suppose yo...